Rain

Some days I find the rain relaxing. Other days I find it emotional. Here is a Tanka Poem with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count (hope I did it right!). Tanka Poems are usually about nature, seasons, love, sadness or other strong emotions.

Rain

The rain falls- splish, splash.

Droplets can disguise the tears.

Rain, rain, oh please, stay.

Hide my fears another day.

I am not ready to play. 

One response to “Rain”

  1. Oh, I like how you surprised us with a twist–wanting the rain to stay to hide your fears.

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